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ok i kinda put my char list in a spoiler now maybe thatll help but if not ill follow the rules

[MysticMoon]

After 10 hours of putting in subtitles and making the episode 8 trailer, part 4 is finally here!

[bida2]

it better not be in your pants mr.legendary lol lol lol xD

[Kinneko]

Kekeke. Pudding is getting a naughty mindset.

[Lerkurliantamer]

I wish I could be in this series ;_; It's sooo epic.

[MrHell]

Just to show there aren't just fanboys of this series.

I do appreciate the effort that's been put in this series and the cinematography (if you can call it that =x ) is just great, especially if you consider it's limited source.

However I can't help but feel that the story is somewhat lacking. The dialogue is also something that can get incredibly cheesy sometime. And another note that could be worked on is the horrible spelling that's being used as the subtitles. It's just too distracting for me, and I can't enjoy the episode as much as I can because of that.

That said, I don't want to burn down this series at all. I know it's really hard to make something like this so don't get me wrong. It really has potential, that's why I'm saying this, because noone else seems to do it. =/

So maybe ping (I'm guessing he's writing the story and the dialogue, I'm not too sure on that though) can ask someone's help for the dialogue or story. Maybe Kinneko can help(after her busy days are over of course :P), because her stories are great usually. And she knows how to make stories more engaging for the reader/viewer. Plus she's already involved in the series already, as far as I could tell.
Just a suggestion though. =x

[Kinneko]

Originally Posted by MrHell

Plus she's already involved in the series already, as far as I could tell.

I just helped with uncovered voices.

[xmarentilx]

Wow. I just finished watching all the parts.
I must say I was impressed. I really enjoyed them, and I can't wait for the next episode looks amazing.
I would love to be part of an episode but unfortunately I dont have a microphone ):

[Linkie]

Originally Posted by MrHell

And another note that could be worked on is the horrible spelling that's being used as the subtitles. It's just too distracting for me, and I can't enjoy the episode as much as I can because of that.

I have to agree with this, although I love the series so far.

[t b u k]

WTF WHERE WAS THE FINAL BATTLE?! D:<

Lee vs Ping better be epic. D: AND SO DOES PUDDING VS TGE WHEN PUDDING HITS PUBERTY. D8

[xmarentilx]

Originally Posted by t b u k

WTF WHERE WAS THE FINAL BATTLE?! D:<

Lee vs Ping better be epic. D: AND SO DOES PUDDING VS TGE WHEN PUDDING HITS PUBERTY. D8

Ya I was all excited to see the battle then I looked at the time left and my soul was crushed.

[Jasvena]

Originally Posted by MrHell

However I can't help but feel that the story is somewhat lacking. The dialogue is also something that can get incredibly cheesy sometime. And another note that could be worked on is the horrible spelling that's being used as the subtitles. It's just too distracting for me, and I can't enjoy the episode as much as I can because of that.

i believe the spelling was off because it is supposed to be what the characters are TYPING.
do YOU always spell right while you are in-game? i know i dont. most times im in too much of a hurry to tell a noob asking me 4 buffs to bug off while fighting.
also, some believe the CHEESY dialogue is funny. its the random chuckle stuff. watch family guy and you'll get the point.

as for the series, WAY TO END ON A CLIFF (aka, nice cliffhanger ending) i cant wait to see the next episode.
also, i have a question. i havent read the character bio things so i may get smacked for asking this. but how old is PUDDING's player supposed to be?

[MysticMoon]

However I can't help but feel that the story is somewhat lacking. The dialogue is also something that can get incredibly cheesy sometime.

Ok. When we make an episode, we neve know the diolage script until after everything is layed out, transitions and special effects are done, and the music is set in place. After that, we gt to work an thinking of a script baed on what we editied. This can get very difficult because there are times when you think of something that would be great, and then there is this akward scene that doesnt make sence to the line... or we run out of time and have to cut the line short. And when you get several hundred people telling you "hurry up!", "you must steal these episodes since you taking so long!", or "you need to decide on a real release date!", and the random "you suck!" ...well that just makes the whole process sink in the level of quality. We cant always have the best lines EVER because this isnt supposed to be a perfect story with perfect lines that are always... well, perfect! I mean, anything that comes out of Pudding mouth is going to be cheesey. And Ping just like to talk like a hero! And TGE is retarded, lol. Anyways, what Im getting at is, its not supposed to be perfect. These characters dont say awesome things, they say funny, cheesey things... I duno if that even made any sense.

Originally Posted by Jasvena

i believe the spelling was off because it is supposed to be what the characters are TYPING.
do YOU always spell right while you are in-game?

This is true. If you havent noticed, each character types differently. Pudding never spells out here words correctly and neither does TGE. But Mystic is ver proper and does. Also, when you chat, you add smiles and stuff > The subtitles are there so you always know what is being said. Sometimes it gets hard to understand what Pudding or CuteButt says. We also thought about anyone who cant understand english very well. We hoped that by adding subtitles, it would make it eaiser for everyone to understand whats going on. Although if I were to go back to the moment when we made the first episode for the horror/spooky contest, I would have said NO SUBTITLES just because they take forever to make and delay the release time!

Originally Posted by Jasvena

also, i have a question. i havent read the character bio things so i may get smacked for asking this. but how old is PUDDING's player supposed to be?

Well... I never reall thought about how old she is.... if real life im 21 but I would say she would be around 15-17. She just really likes being cute! ^^

[t b u k]

I love Pudding. xD She's so adorable. My only complaint if any would be I'm not too sure about LegendaryLover. Is he good or bad? Or just out for e-sex? Seems a tad random to me @_@ hope he gets developed.

[Jasvena]

Originally Posted by t b u k

I love Pudding. xD She's so adorable. My only complaint if any would be I'm not too sure about LegendaryLover. Is he good or bad? Or just out for e-sex? Seems a tad random to me @_@ hope he gets developed.

i for one think that mr. legendary will one day (though he seems to be very weak and a complete idiot) be a very major role. (rain will probably straighten him out and shave him ^_^ ) my main reason for thinking this is at the end of the 4th part of ep. 7 HE is the only one who notices something is happening (something impossible to do in-game might i add)

that is just my view on L L

as for PUDDING's age i was guessing around 12-13 . . . . haha i like your numbers better though xD and WOOT go you for being 21! (only 19 myself T_T ) just dont party your life away haha