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Default 08-08-2006, 11:33 AM


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I posted a bid of an original work of fanfiction of no less than 2,000 words in the Flyffworld Auction a while back, for the right to have Rooh refer to me as Lord and Master (though gradually the motivation for writing it was my attachment to this place :P).

Anyway, I won the bid, so here is the work...

The work is made up of (roughly) 12 parts, and each day I will post one part (or more ... depends on the mood). Feel free to leave constructive feedback, good and/or bad, after each part.

Thanks to all the Flyffworld members who helped to make this possible.
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A Flyffworld Tale

By Aaerdan

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The figure in black read out the words. His companions listened quietly, all noting that his voice lowered as his temper rose.

It was only early morning, but the mood darkened the surroundings considerably.

"Be there..." he finished. "-or be square."

An awkward silence fell. Seconds passed. Minutes.

"Rubbish!" he roared, threw the leaflet into the air and drew his sword. When he sheathed the blade, all that was left was confetti.

Another long silence.

"Boss?" one of the others asked hesitantly.

"Tell the others to prepare ... we meet tonight near Martin's," the man instructed. "You, you and you, come with me. We have things that need doing before the event tomorrow night."

"What are you planning, Boss?" another asked.

"I'll tell you this evening. Come."

As one the rest nodded, the gathering dispersed.
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Part One: Rooh

SHE cursed. Not sure that anyone had heard her, she repeated her exclamation.

Nobody reacted. Not the tea boy balancing a tray of empty cups on his forehead while holding another tray with not-so-empty ones. Not the officers in the adjacent cubicles.

Certainly not the woman in regulation uniform - standing outside her cubicle - who just handed her a memo.

"The worst thing one can curse with," she muttered under her breath, "-and nobody around here gets it."

She read the memo again. No doubt about it. Written in neat long-hand, clearly stating what was required of her.

"Rooh, Juria at Customer Services is unavailable today. Take over her duties right away. Signed, Ollien," she read out loud, adding: "Not even a 'Please'."

"I trust you have read and understood the contents of the memorandum, Ms Rooh," the uniformed woman said. "Please come with me."

Rooh sighed and got up. No point arguing that she needed time to get in the mood for grunt work. These "NPCs" have no sense of anything remotely human.

She hesitated for a bit at that thought. She never did find out what "NPC" stood for. Rooh only knew that that it was a label with negative connotations.

"Okay, let's go," she said. "Slave reporting for duty!"

That drew, Rooh imagined, a hint of a smile on the officer's otherwise expressionless face.

"This way, please," the officer said, and led Rooh down a corridor that would not have been out of place in some underground dungeon, leading to some long-forgotten cell. Except that here it was brightly lit, the cleaners were ruthlessly efficient and everybody but Rooh kept a tidy desk.

But of course they were all "NPCs". Rooh at least was human. At least that's why she thought she had these thoughts about how rigid the "NPCs" were.

Come to think of it...

"Hey, officer," she asked as they stepped out in the sun. There was a large crowd just outside the building. Juria's absence was being felt. "What does NPC stand for?"

"Non-Player Character," a youthful voice said.

"Thanks," she replied before she turned to see who it was. It was not anyone she knew. "What does it mean?"

"It means-"

"Ms Rooh, this way," the officer said firmly. "I have cleared a path through the crowd for you. Please ... some of them have waited since early morning."

She made a face, apologised to the youth and went to take her place behind the counter.
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A Flyffworld Tale: Part Two

Last edited by aaerdan; 08-13-2006 at 07:44 AM.
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Default 08-08-2006, 11:45 AM
Dude... that's totally me.


Lord and Master Aaerdan knows me too well XD



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Default 08-08-2006, 11:47 AM
Well, I'm not going to comment until more has been posted...didn't really get much from the first part =\
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Default 08-08-2006, 11:50 AM
Oh man 11 days to get the whole story ):

Still a good job with the beggining.Thumbs up for the next parts.
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Default 08-08-2006, 11:52 AM
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Shinzo @ Aug 8 2006, 06:47 PM) [snapback]133200[/snapback]</div>
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Well, I'm not going to comment until more has been posted...didn't really get much from the first part =\
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No worries. The beauty is that I've already completed it, so it all boils down to mood.

Shinzo isn't appearing so early anyway

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Oh man 11 days to get the whole story ):

Still a good job with the beggining.Thumbs up for the next parts.
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Not quite so long, I think.
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Default 08-08-2006, 11:57 AM
Aaerdan, you would leave me in suspense? Why? I thought we were friends? Have I offended you!? why do you torture me!? Arrrgh...its such a good build up too -_- DAMMIT
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I'm looking forward to my cameo role as a hobo on the street ;_;
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Default 08-08-2006, 11:58 AM
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The work is made up of (roughly) 12 parts, and each day I will post one part (or more ... depends on the mood). Feel free to leave constructive feedback, good and/or bad, after each part.[/b]

aaerdan likes to torture us. =/
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Default 08-08-2006, 11:59 AM
Lord and Master Aaerdan may do so if he wishes, though XP



I'm so awesome <3
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Default 08-08-2006, 12:00 PM
Part Two: Joseth

"...A character who exists to provide a semblance of society," the youth finished anyway, even though the women had left.

"You saying something?" a stout man behind him in the queue asked.

"Legend," the youth muttered, then caught himself. "No, I mean 'no'. Sorry!"

The man chuckled. "She's pretty, I saw." He looked up. "Wish we didn't have to stand out in the hot sun."

"You saw?"

He nodded. "But she's an NPC like the rest of them, so pretty as she is, there's no point to it."

The youth smiled weakly, scratching his spikey crown. "I guess," he admitted.

"What are you?" the man asked. "I'm Baldwin," he gestured at his balding pate, "-a Mercenary of some renown."

"I'm Joseth," he replied, "Blade-to-be."

"Merc too, eh?"

"Yeah."

Baldwin motioned the youth to move forward. "The line's finally moving some, now that the pretty lady's here."

"Uh-huh."

"Still thinking of the NPC?" Baldwin asked. Before Joseth could answer, he said: "You really shouldn't. Take it from me. I've tried. Thrice, in fact. First with this NPC at Tina's. Now, she was hot, with a capital 'R'."

Joseth scratched his head again. He wasn't sure he wanted the details. He feigned a yawn.

The other man didn't get it. "Had breasts bigger than ... this," Baldwin drew obscene images in the air - huge images - with a flourish, "-and boy they could suffocate!"

"I don't think-"

"But she was like any other NPC, you know?" Baldwin continued. He drew his sword halfway. "Mighty fine to look at, but cold as steel."

Joseth took one, two steps forward and came to a stop. Baldwin was rambling on. The youth made obligatory sound effects like "I see", "Uh-huh" and "Ah".

He noticed then three men, a little ahead of him in the queue. He recognised them, for like him they were members of the same organisation, although they had not been formally introduced.

Joseth remembered feeling uncomfortable when he saw them the first time just outside the Saint Morning Flyffworld chapterhouse. The taller of the three, who was also the skinniest, was trying to intimidate one of the new members into doing something disgusting. The other two were on hand for support. There were others too, Joseth recalled.

Baldwin poked him suddenly.

"Yes?"

"See that lass? Now she is definitely human," the stout man said, pointing at a woman in a red dress and pink boots. "Knockout, isn't she? I sure would love to get my hands on her-"

The youth wished he was somewhere else.
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A Flyffworld Tale: Part Three

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D:

Still not sure what's going on...

You're capturing the characters personailitys really well so far
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Is it tomorrow already? But dude... <3 it. I got a little confused at the beginning, though, before the names were exchanged... at who was talking each line, but eh. XD


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o.o Baldwin is a bad influence.
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Default 08-08-2006, 12:08 PM
Baldwin makes me think of Shinzo...

but at least he thinks I'm pretty ^^


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Default 08-08-2006, 12:12 PM
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Is it tomorrow already? But dude... <3 it. I got a little confused at the beginning, though, before the names were exchanged... at who was talking each line, but eh. XD
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Hmmmm. Good point. Fixed. I'm pretty sure Joseth is a youth... right, Joseth?
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