I have to agree with a few of the previous comments. Some of your colors are hard to read, and they also lack unity and formating. I'm a visual person, so I guess that's a bias, but I think this guide would be a bit smoother if you took some time to actually look at how the colors and text appear to your readers.
Also, I've read all the other AoE Assist/BP/RM guides I could find and all of them say to cap STA at 60 or 80, then go full STR. I don't know the rules for guides, but I you can always look at other builds and explain why you think that the full STR is an advantage (it always depends on the player, so using all caps to say that STR AoE is the best isn't really your decision).
Might wanna look for typos and grammar - if your guide is easy to understand and read, you'll get more positive feedback, more readership and you'll most likely get a few people eager to be your friend.
Also, I agree that saying that full INT builds can go FS and "Bleh So What?" isn't something you should be saying in a guide - particularly when there are a few other, better guides that explain exactly why an INT build can succeed. Do your research - there are going to be some players who will take your advice and then which they never looked at your work.
Also, and I'll warn you now - I am a grammar b*tch, please don't use capitals where they don't belong. It doesn't put an emphasis on your words, it only makes them look childish. Trust me, I know.
Finally, be a bit more courteous to your critics - sure, some might be pretty mean, but they took the time to even glance and your guide. Say "Thanks" and take their advice, or if you don't want to, say "Thanks for your input, I'll see if I can work it in somewhere." - that way, won't offend people and your guide will look a lot more professional and trustworthy.
Now, if there are still people reading at this point, don't forget to read the other guides. An AoE Assist is pretty fun - I played around with it on my main and then I decided to get an alt which was a pure AoE build. So, doing research isn't just for people who want to write guides, it's for the people who want to do what the guide is telling them.
Thanks and good luck.
~Social
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