All I would really suggest is to fix up some of the grammar (commas in the first paragraph of the Intro) and take a good look at your first job change quests.
I can only speak for Assists (have 3 of 'em - one of which I screwed) so we only need 5 Forform for our 1st job change. Then, we kill 10 small Aibatt,
not Mushpang.
Also, you might want to mention AoEing. This seems to be a general guide (correct me if I'm wrong) and AoE is a normal thing to see in Flyff. It might help some newbies if they read this, and if you point them in the right direction to good AoE guides, kudos to you from Bubble. (Corny, I know).
That's really all I have to say in terms of solid things to look at, next is just formating. I love your idea for Tables of Contents for each part, but you might want to look at removing the double space between the stats in the Vagrant builds. So instead of:
STR #
STA #
....
You have
STR #
STA #
Makes things a bit easier to read and less likely for your readers to skip a line and line up the wrong stat with the wrong number.
Good general guide, though, the most detailed general guide I've seen.
