[MrHell]

Just to show there aren't just fanboys of this series.

I do appreciate the effort that's been put in this series and the cinematography (if you can call it that =x ) is just great, especially if you consider it's limited source.

However I can't help but feel that the story is somewhat lacking. The dialogue is also something that can get incredibly cheesy sometime. And another note that could be worked on is the horrible spelling that's being used as the subtitles. It's just too distracting for me, and I can't enjoy the episode as much as I can because of that.

That said, I don't want to burn down this series at all. I know it's really hard to make something like this so don't get me wrong. It really has potential, that's why I'm saying this, because noone else seems to do it. =/

So maybe ping (I'm guessing he's writing the story and the dialogue, I'm not too sure on that though) can ask someone's help for the dialogue or story. Maybe Kinneko can help(after her busy days are over of course :P), because her stories are great usually. And she knows how to make stories more engaging for the reader/viewer. Plus she's already involved in the series already, as far as I could tell.
Just a suggestion though. =x